the 'afterwards'...

so i'm having verbal diarrhoea but then again i hate disappointing people....
just reading this commentary by an author on how he battled with whether or not to include a steamy sex scence in his second novel....and after much thought decided to settle with ..'afterwards'... you know "she entered the room hesitantly and afterwards they lack back contended" types....
i wish more movies/ serials would use this method... consider this scene...i'm watching T.V. even something as 'safe' as Friends....and the min my mom/dad walks past, they make out like its going out of style... i'm not kidding you....it happens every single time....
they could be in the middle of the freaking war zone in afghanistan, all battered and bruised holding body parts in their hands, but the min parents walk into room, they are going at it hammer and tongs... v v avoidable....

the commentary also had some of the entries for the Bad Sex Awards... most are not worth putting up here but this one is a laugh riot....
"she's taking off her blouse. it's on the floor. her breasts are placards for the endomorphically endowed. inspite of yourself, a soft whistle of air escapes you"....
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